Super Science Part 2

Super Science Part 2
Thump thump. Thump thump. Thump...

For the briefest of moments, Dana's heart stopped beating. Inhalation and exhalation halted. Then without any fanfare, her vital systems resumed functioning. Which was fantastic, really great, but voluntary muscle movement below the neck remained elusive. Dana panicked at the thought of being a paraplegic.

So she screamed, or at least really tried to. It came out like more of a whimper since her lungs were too busy breathing normally to supply her with sufficient air to make a respectable noise.

No moving. And even screaming was out of the question. What *could* she do? Dana decided to look down and inspect the damage the ray did to her sternum. She expected a smoking hole in her chest, so finding that all the stupid thing did was cause some minor inflammation came as a relief. Wait, the area was getting puffier. No, actually, those were her breasts billowing outward, unchecked.

Time to scream again. She didn't bother trying to be loud. For the benefit of any possible onlookers she just opened her mouth wide: the international pantomime for extreme distress.
This sequence has been animated by Sergio on the Process Forums.


blood on
yay! continuation!

Melissa on
Minus the whole "dead for a few seconds" part, what a great device!

SirJimmy on
Why spend billions on spacecraft and hadron colliders when you can make a BE Machine?

The shooting-a-girl-and-making-her-half-dead thing needs to be ironed out though. Awesome story idea!

Malhavoc on
Minor detail on the half dead thing. Totally an acceptable side effect... usually...

woot on
I'd say it was quicker than a few seconds. Maybe I should have wrote that her heart "skipped a beat," but this was more dramatic. Maybe overly dramatic! Sorry ;)

Anyways it's just flimsy justification for her remaining in place for this whole ordeal (a poor man's series of picture repaints).

Bestthe on
Just need to get one little bug out(aside from that death part which has been pointed out 4 times already)...but i'll wait before pointing it out.

Muhznit on
A cause of BE that DOESN'T give the intended subject boobs as large as her head as an end result? I'm surprised people care more about the near-death experience part.

blood on
I just wonder if she's gonna keep growin, or if this is the last we'll see of her, I'll wait to see *waits*

player5901 on
PLEASE Tell me you're not finished with this storyline, woot. I love this kind of story!

Jed on
she has some giant hips... shoot her chest again!!!

BalloonPrincess on
Houston, we have breasts! :)

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