Feedback Loop

Feedback Loop
Every time Jackie hopped on her scooter, she noticed that the area in between her ribcage and the handlebar was getting more and more crowded. This wasn't just an optical illusion; just three weeks ago, she could still read the speedometer. Now when she looked down, all she could see was taut pink fabric framing a deep expanse of cleavage. What would another month of unchecked growth bring? Would she still be able to get around on her scooter?

Those were some discomforting thoughts. Jackie certainly didn't want to slink back to using the sardine can grope-fest called the Location City Transit System. It was bad enough when she first moved into the metro area and she was still a relatively modest G-cup. But now? Jackie shuddered.

Just thinking about it had her stressing out so much that she almost didn't see the bus in front of her slow down as it pulled over the the curb. She swerved away, cutting it so close that the side of her right boob left a clean streak in the grime coating the bus' flank. This city was out to kill her!

Shaken, Jackie stopped at the nearest Duncan Donutz to steady her nerves with a chocolate éclair. Or three. She didn't want the one to get lonely in her stomach. As she licked custard from her fingers, she had to admit that this was her sad life in Location City in a nutshell: flip out and then medicate with food.

She stopped in the bathroom to see how bad the damage to her shirt was. Sadly, the bus grime didn't want to brush off. Bleh.

While she was in front of the mirror, she had to admit that it wasn't just her breasts that were getting larger and heavier. Jackie lifted them up and out of the way as best she could to peek at her little (OK, only comparatively little) éclair-filled potbelly. It was mostly sheathed by her top, but where it overhung the waist of her capris, a crescent moon of skin showed. She lowered her boobs back down and looked at herself in profile, futilely tugging her shirt down and witnessing it return to it's default position.

She abandoned her efforts with her top and shifted her gaze downwards. Boy, these pants made her butt look big! Jackie took her long bushy ponytail in hand and turned away from the mirror more, looking over her shoulder at her huge heart-shaped ass. Then she shifted her weight from one leg to another, watching her plump cheeks grind against each other like tectonic plates. Actually, she made it look kind of sexy.

Then two things had the great misfortune of happening simultaneously; grinning like an idiot at her reflection, Jackie used her free hand to slap her butt just as the restroom door opened to admit an older lady. This lady gave Jackie the most withering look of disgust imaginable, and propelled by the stare's hate rays, the redhead beat a hasty retreat.

Jackie slunk out store and got back on her scooter, heedless of the complaints coming from its over-taxed suspension. After this fiasco, she felt like she needed something tasty to calm her stomach.


Anonymous on
Not understanding the title's relevance to the story, but very well written. Also, great image, as always.

???? on
I smell a possible sequel.....

woot on
Oh lookie- my fancy-pants accented e's in the word 'eclair' didn't copy over. Could you replace them with regular old e's please? Thanks!

anon on
Fixed the encode. é!

O on
Don't you just love HTML?

woot on
Yeah, I'm not sold on the title. But here's the rationale on the current one: there's a looping series of actions going on. She deals with stress by eating. The result of her eating cause her stress, ect...

Anyways, I'm up for seeing if people would want to contribute possible alternative titles :]

Somebody on
Duncan Donutz? Are you fucking serious? That's hilarious!

SirJimmy on
Haha, the very tiny Troll doll~

Big boobs, big belly, big butt, big hair and big glasses. Tolle Kombination! Seems there's a lot of disparaging, grumpy old women in Location City though.

anonymouse on
...Okay, scratch the last one: now THIS is my favourite one. Seriously, you're improving at an almost-scary rate.

Also, I love how the feedback loop isn't just by the natural hazards of city traffic: it's also due to her boobs hiding the speedometer thus making her more prone to speeding, and her getting distracted by their size, both increasing her anxiety and subsequent self-medicating. It's accelerating :)

Krissy on
@Anonymous, I would assume it's just because the bigger she gets, the more freakouts she has, the more she eats, the bigger she gets. A loop of gaining based on the feedback she gets from her surroundings.

hhgv on
I love your work! I think you should make more butt expansion and weight pics. Also, I you plan to make sequel to this story. ;) And please make more butt expansion A.S.A.P. Pleaseeeeeeee!

Melissa on
I've always wanted a Vespa.

El-Jorro on
Combines 2 of my favorite things
Huge Boobs and Scooters!

SchwarzTKD on
Little Girl in the Big City?
Stress Relief?
Too Big for her Britches?

KT on
Wow, I LOVE this one! She is so cute, so perfectly curvey, and I would LOVE to see more of her story, and well, of her. :)

Schartzengerman on
I like SSBW girls as much as the next guy, but maybe we could see a more slender girl in the future? That last pic, the sirens one, was great. Big boobs and wide hips without a fat belly and chubby cheeks to ruin the look.

formorian5 on
Great pic, WooT. Your really good at making these, er, plus-sized girls look sexy and natural. Also, do you dislike doing series'? I know you have Milk and Cookies, In search of support, and Tenfingers, but A lot of people would like to see continuations of other pics. Is this a case of you not wanting to do it, or your so overwhelmed with this art and other things that you can't do it?

Somebody on
If that's a Troll keychain, I'll jizz spontainiously...

Zach on
I love her design! The boobs on the handlebars is a great idea!

superanonymous13 on
Hey! It's Yoko Littner!!

BalloonPrincess on
**Giggles!**

It's funny ... I just saw down in Richmond Hill, Georgia the other day that they opened a new Dunkin Doughnuts. The timing on this piece is interesting to say the least. :)

Dio on
LOL she does look like Yoko XD
Another good one Woot!

woot on
@Schartzengerman: I consciously try to mix it up as far as big and regular sized girls go. Hopefully you'll see something you like better soon.

@formorian5: I try and not create new series while Tenfingers is on hold. Sure, there's been some exceptions to this rule, but usually because I plan on a 2 part thing and it goes long (AKA: Beach Trip). In the meantime, I make self-contained stories I call one-shots. I'm glad that people would like to see continuations of some of these. If people didn't want more, it'd mean that I was messing up!

@superanonymous13: The hair's not quite right ;]

And to everyone else- thank-you very much!

hhgv on
HELLO AGAIN! I justwent to say you have made an amazing artwork and I really think you should make more weight and butt expansion artwork. Also, I really hope make sequel to this ;) and make story in the future;). And last last I have an idea for your next artwork if you hear out. It involes two girls that are best friend that decides to work in this fast-food place were they have to revealing outfits also the food there is amazing. And to make this short and to the point, they started to gain large amount of weight in there belly, butt, and thighs, but mostly in the butt (thanks to the food there.) So if you that its a good idea pleaseeee let me know ok.

woot on
I'm not sure about a making a sequel to this so soon. As for your idea: Sinnabunn is sort of my go-to butt expansion vehicle. I've had an old WG idea that involves a girl and a (different) restaurant, but in my head it's a series, and I shy away from those. Glad you liked this one though. Jackie won't be the last big girl I draw :]

Djoser on
Why do bodacious girls in scooters look so adorable? must be ebcause they are crowding susch small vehicle? or maybe ebcause a scooter looks so contrastating when carrying a goddess? :p

333 on
Woot, Im hoping for a sequel, After reading the first paragraph, i REALLY want to see another month of unchecked growth. Keep up the amazing work my man.

hhgv on
Thank for listening to my idea and like I've said before I think you make more butt expansion. Also I hope you do make more big girls like Jackie. ;) Last, if you don't mind tell us about your next artwork and what it will be.

hhgv on
Woot are you planning to make any butt expansion. And can you give me some advices on drawing because I went to be a great artist like you one day. :]

woot on
Hmm, I think my first bit of art advice would be to aim a bit higher! :]

Melissa on
Out of curiosity, do you also draw a lot of non-adult-orientated pictures? I also ask this because that's a pretty well done scooter.

woot on
I used to draw more non-adult stuff. As time progressed, I had fewer and fewer opportunities to share that artwork, and thus I slowly stopped doing it. Anyways, I do like drawing props. They'll continue to pop up in my adult images.

hhgv on
woot can you me a little about how you draw the boobs, belly, butt, thigh. Alway how you draw the
curves.

hhgv on
Woot, do you do drawing request?:|

woot on
I listen to suggestions. I can't guarantee I'll do a specific request.

hhgv on
woot could you draw jackie in a bikani or tights.

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